Caro, Good but your letter is too short. Some things to improve: - download the file and upload it to the blog so that people can see it directly here, instead of following the link. - spelling: letter, being, disease, Raleigh - grammar: to+infinitive --> to say - exposed to everything - the information give: what can Raleigh tell his sister about his time at the front? Did he meet anybody? Did he make any friends? Expand it a little bit.
Caro,
ResponderBorrarGood but your letter is too short. Some things to improve:
- download the file and upload it to the blog so that people can see it directly here, instead of following the link.
- spelling: letter, being, disease, Raleigh
- grammar: to+infinitive --> to say
- exposed to everything
- the information give: what can Raleigh tell his sister about his time at the front? Did he meet anybody? Did he make any friends? Expand it a little bit.